Monday, April 13, 2009

Add one more verse for me?

I%26#039;m trying to write a very short, funny but sweet poem for mine and my husband%26#039;s anniversary. So far, I%26#039;ve got:





Fruit and flowers are tradition


For Four years or marriage


In good condition.





I need one or two more verses to end it. Can you help me. I just really want to say that I love him and that kind of stuff. Thanks for your help.

Add one more verse for me?
Fruits and flowers are tradition.


For four years goes our marriage.


And sits in good condition.


I am glad to have found my spring.





A bloom ready to open...


Sits for love and passion sweet.


For however long that wait does go.


They sit in patient seat.





The times moved slow,


a long hard wait.


Like an orchid I am fragile.


But then, the soft wind gives a blow.





That warm summer spring,


had finally knocked me open.


And now a bloomed flower I shine.


Not ready to close...


For now the spring is mine.





Fruits and flowers are tradition.


For four years goes our marriage.


And sits in good condition.


I am glad to have found my spring.





(Sorry...)


(I wanted to slightly change your first verse.)


(If it bothers you, tell me)


(Then I can try to add on how you want me to.)


(I like poetry.)


(I am here to help.)
Reply:through the joy and the pain


with you I both enjoy


the sunshine and the rain





Hope you%26#039;ll add it. :-)
Reply:I like what the above did, but not sure it sounds like you! LOL!
Reply:Fruit and flowers are tradition


For four years of marriage


In good condition.





title:





How Do I Show How My Love Goes?





How quickly do the slow years go?


My love, only you and I know.





But I can give you more than fruits


or flowers


or tradition.





I pledge myself again


to you


and here are my conditions.





Take care, my sweet, with my soft heart.


It has a precious measure.





And I, with you, will take care too,


because your heart%26#039;s a treasure.





What fond delights will we ignite


some four more years from here?





I do not know.


Neither do you.


But the dream is to dream...cause I%26#039;m here!





I love you.



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